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Sept 24, 2007 18:10:35 GMT -5
Post by {W}ave{s}tar on Sept 24, 2007 18:10:35 GMT -5
I thought of a possible plot last night while I was trying to go to sleep.Tell me waht you think. In the moonlight, so bright, Eight cats will be chosen to fight, Among or alongside each other, we do not know, but shall see, The life and forest depends on thee... It basically means that if they chosen ones don't complete their mission, every cat will die.
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Sept 24, 2007 18:13:42 GMT -5
Post by Water on Sept 24, 2007 18:13:42 GMT -5
I lurv it. But starclan usually knows what what their prophecies mean, so I think you should take out the 3 line or rearange it to sound more confidant.
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Sept 24, 2007 18:23:48 GMT -5
Post by {W}ave{s}tar on Sept 24, 2007 18:23:48 GMT -5
I just took it out. A lot simpler now. ;D
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Sept 24, 2007 21:27:16 GMT -5
Post by Water on Sept 24, 2007 21:27:16 GMT -5
I love it now. Before it was ...well... not as good
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Sept 25, 2007 18:47:58 GMT -5
Post by {W}ave{s}tar on Sept 25, 2007 18:47:58 GMT -5
Ya same opinion here.
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